microtonal Op.7 Nr.1 my new microtonal piano piece

this is my new piece, hope you like it, if you like, you can give me some suggestions.

the video: 【微分音钢琴】作品7之1 无标题_哔哩哔哩_bilibili

Hi @cloud10000!

I wonder if a real performance of any of your micro-tonal piano pieces could be arranged by setting up like, a double manual midi keyboard with one of the manuals either tuned a quarter-tone off from the equal tempered keyboard or with a lumatone instead of a keyboard?  You seem to be coming into your own style with this piece - I like it because you're not including any work by other composers.  Honestly, when you included other composers' works in your micro-tonal pieces, to me that was like a sacrilegious butchering of the original material.  If you had written your own original set of variations on another composer's work and included original variations that were micro-tonal, that would be quite interesting and desirable to me.  And even this piece, even though it includes micro-tones, they are only an occasional ornament to the mostly equal tempered music (which might make them possible to play after all with the set-up I described above?).  Regarding the music - I like the slow middle section and the seamless transition back to the jumpy part.  But on the whole, for being a micro-tonal piece, to me, it's not micro-tonal enough.  Also, imo, the music just stops at the end.  But it sounds like there should be another movement or like it should continue somehow.  It definitely doesn't sound final and conclusive imo.  Thanks for sharing!

I really like the sound of this. It's constantly going somewhere. No directionless noodling. Not a dull moment. With that it did leave me wanting more though... So I agree that the end is a bit sudden and could really do with more winding down or more of a climax. So I really liked it, but wish there was more.