Sonata_5 Posted July 22 Share Posted July 22 Any feedback to improve on? PDF Sonata in f major movement 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jqh73o Posted July 22 Share Posted July 22 Could you attach a recording or playback from your editor? Thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted July 26 Share Posted July 26 Hello @Sonata_5 and welcome to the forum! I perused your score and it seems, on the surface, like a solid sonata form movement! There's a main theme which modulates from the tonic key of F major to C major. Then, for the second theme, you take the listener to A minor with a codetta that brings the piece back to C major in preparation for the repeat. There's a development which starts in C minor, uses liberal sequencing and modulation ending in C major in preparation for a return back to the main theme in F major. The second theme is in F major this time and modulates to D minor instead of A minor. Then, there's a codetta in C major bringing the piece to a conclusion in F major. I would really love to hear how this sounds! Like @Jqh73o mentioned, you could play it yourself or generate a rendition from your program, just to give us a general idea (although it's also fun to imagine). By the way, I think I noticed a mistake in your score - in measures 6 beat 3 you have this: I think the left hand should have a B natural as well since the right hand has one for a nice V/V G7 chord. Thanks for sharing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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