an other quick speed composition

Hope its okay i share a youtube link.

I thought it turned out pretty good.

Any feedback is highly apreciated as always.

Thanks.

Hi @Bjarke,

I like the opening you create with high strings and contemplative brass music. I like the modulation in 0:47 after a slightly more dissonant passage. The ending is climactic as well and I like the harp at the end. For me the piece feel like an ending of a piece and you should extend it!

Henry

Hello @Bjarke

I am really fond of the progressive distortion that you choose to implement in this piece, it sounds like it is trying to take over the purity of the beginning in a way, though, as Henry has mentioned, this piece would benefit a lot from being longer, as, among other reasons, this structural technique is much more effective in longer works as you can see more easily how the music has changed (or kept the same after a rough development), as it has developed more. 

I would have added the lower strings a little earlier, but that is just personal taste

Thanks for sharing 
Manuel

Hi @Bjarke!

This is great work!  I love the cinematic and mysterious vibe you conjure in the beginning which then slowly builds and explodes into a ritardando fanfare which decrescendos before finishing off the piece.  Is the YT video graphic a picture from the movie Avatar?  Or maybe it's some AI-generated image?  How long did it take you to create this?  I perceive this piece to be of a higher quality than the previous speed composition you submitted.  Thanks for sharing!

Thanks everyone for your feedbacks and compliments!

@PeterthePapercomPoser

Actually regarding the picture it might be but i can't comfirm as it was really just some random picture which i found

on a website i can download image for free xD 

This speed composition i believe took less than 3 hours i believe maybe around 2 hours?

I usually do my speed composition in a few hours but if they are longer than 2 minutes it usually require more days.

Thanks all again! 🙂