Mythic Lands - Suite - A WIP Piece!

Hi all! I've been trying to utilize the feedback I've heard here on the forum to keep growing in my skills as a composer and better translate my ideas. This is a piece I've been working on the past couple days. I've tried to incorporate more low-end to make the piece feel more balanced and full. As well as keep things moving in new and different ways instead of just building consistently by adding one section in at a time. This was made in FL Studio, using a variety of Spitfire Audio VSTs; BBCSO Discover, Intimate Strings, Epic Choirs, Labs, and Rare Flutes; as well as some percussion from Amadeus Symphonic Orchestra.

The goal of this piece was to take a few themes I've had concepts for in my head and turn them into an "end credits suite" of sorts. An intense opening, a whimsical middle section, with peace and promise, diving into unsettling territory, and then an epic conclusion! I recently made a few trips to a nearby symphony (I always love evenings spent with the symphony) so it fueled my desire to keep furthering my skills even more!

Hope you enjoy the listen and I'm looking forward to the feedback!

Hi @Layne!

Contrary to your description, I actually hear this as perhaps the beginning of a creepy Halloween movie.  I think you've definitely made progress with this piece.  You don't resort to just repeating the same idea with added or subtracted instruments, or changed orchestration.  It seems like each part of the piece is unique and emerges more naturally and is well conceived.  Your orchestration also sounds less empty and more full-bodied and wholesome.  Perhaps you're using more of the string orchestra at once.  Now, the thing that I perceive is limiting you and making this sound a bit square is that it's all in 4/4 meter.  Even the grand pause at 5:19 is exactly 4 beats long.  Also - along the same lines - your tempo never seems to fluctuate.  Now, that might not be necessary in this piece and you could argue that changing the tempo anywhere in it would ruin the vibe you're going for.  But it's worth mentioning because I don't think you've thus far written anything with meter or tempo changes in it.  Those are my thoughts.  Thanks for sharing!

On 10/10/2024 at 11:12 PM, PeterthePapercomPoser said:

Hi @Layne!

Contrary to your description, I actually hear this as perhaps the beginning of a creepy Halloween movie.  I think you've definitely made progress with this piece.  You don't resort to just repeating the same idea with added or subtracted instruments, or changed orchestration.  It seems like each part of the piece is unique and emerges more naturally and is well conceived.  Your orchestration also sounds less empty and more full-bodied and wholesome.  Perhaps you're using more of the string orchestra at once.  Now, the thing that I perceive is limiting you and making this sound a bit square is that it's all in 4/4 meter.  Even the grand pause at 5:19 is exactly 4 beats long.  Also - along the same lines - your tempo never seems to fluctuate.  Now, that might not be necessary in this piece and you could argue that changing the tempo anywhere in it would ruin the vibe you're going for.  But it's worth mentioning because I don't think you've thus far written anything with meter or tempo changes in it.  Those are my thoughts.  Thanks for sharing!

 

I always appreciate your feedback. Thank you for taking the time to listen and being so thorough in your response. I find that often when I write pieces, I'm scoring to visuals in my mind. So, it's interesting to me to hear other interpretations of these pieces and what visuals they bring to those who listen to them. That imagery I think of helps me visualize where I'd like the piece to go next.

Apologies for the late reply, but I did read your comment earlier this week and took your advice! I've begun work on my first piece that isn't in 4/4. It's definitely helped me change up the feeling of this new piece. I've attached it in it's current version if you'd be interested in giving it a listen as well! Currently it's titled "Experiments" because that's exactly what it is, haha!

Hi Layne. 

I think you have a good facility with counterpoint in your works, and some interesting dissonant harmonies.

You're also very good at creating an atmospheric soundscape, and musical storytelling that takes the listener on a journey.

I've had a similar issue with lack of tempo variation, as I was using a DAW that didn't allow for any changes in time signature or tempo within the same project. More recently though, I've begun using MuseScore as a starting point for my composition, which has no such drawbacks.