piano sonata in f sharp

hello, i have recently wrote a piano piece.

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Hem5HcYmpAe7MpKJtQ6xwgeoyzW9MoVV?usp=sharing

google drive has the midi file and pdf for the piece.

thank you very much

This piece is very nice, it is very dramatic and expressive, but the engraving needs some work. Make sure you do not beam over beat groupings unnecessarily, like in the attached screenshot.

You would also do well to avoid putting tempo indications at the ends of systems, which occurs repeatedly.

An interesting and beautiful work. It sounds contemporary but totally accessible.
Perhaps making it easier to listen to there would be some more commentary. It's as simple as dragging the pdf and mp3 files into the message window.

On 11/14/2024 at 8:07 AM, mercurypickles said:

do not beam over beat groupings unnecessarily,

unless you want it phrased in a way tht they have to be connected and even then, for the 2 patterns, you could use, for the circled pattern in the rh , " quaver, dotted quaver, semiquaver, quaver " all separated, and for the lh, quaver, the triplet, followed by quaver ."

I like the blend of contemporary influence alongside traditional forms and structures here. Relate to how @Luis Hernández described how this 

On 11/16/2024 at 5:14 PM, Luis Hernández said:

sounds contemporary but totally accessible.

Thks for sharing!

Hi @Ho Sen Ken,

The piece despite sounds post tonal, is motivically tight with the opening motive. Apart from what @Luis Hernández has recommended by attaching the pdf and mp3, you can also add some commentarites and description on your pieces for other members to know the background of it! Thx for sharing.

Henry