"The Long, Arctic Midnight Suite" - Kyle H. (Local orchestra suggested I make this piece longer.. Need feedback/suggestions)

(Skip to 6:51 6:41 (sorry, typo.) for Movement II, if you've already reviewed "Movement I", or, the original completed work. Updates were made, in plenty for the 1st movement, however, if those who've seen it already felt like giving it another go ;] )

So, I sent just the MP3 Audio via email to a local symphony orchestra ensemble, for Shucks and Bubbles, in case maybe they'd humor me. They reviewed it, in its entirety (how nice of them :D). I already knew they'd finished score collection and rehearsal for their events happening over the next 3-4 months, and mentioned this in my message to them. But, they told me they'd Consider looking it over with the ensemble if I were to extend the music's length, and make some adjustments to the balancing and notation of the first score... So I opted to make it into a 2-part music piece... Please, if anyone is willing, I'd like to know, firstly, since I'm not educated on proper score formatting, if my format and grammar is "ok"... Not looking for perfection, but just simply want to avoid getting the single eyebrow-raise whenever they look at my actual score XD. and Lastly, I'm not entirely too sure how to proceed with the second movement. It's cut off right where I lost momentum, essentially. I also haven't completed filling out some of the voicings in some of the phrases nearing the end of the score, but have already fleshed out some ideas 🙂 

see complete score in the orchestra forum!

I liked what i heard but it cuts off (at least for me) only after about a minute.  If you upload an updated version, I'd love to hear it.

Oh, man, I checked after uploading, myself! plays all through the whole thing fur me... lemme do something then. standby.

2 hours ago, bkho said:

I liked what i heard but it cuts off (at least for me) only after about a minute.  If you upload an updated version, I'd love to hear it.

 

Alright, try it now. New PDF and MP3 have been uploaded, and, as of now, work, on my end through the post's player.