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Hi, I wanted some feedback on a basic Fugue I composed. I attached the pdf and Midi file

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28 minutes ago, Fermata said:

It's a huge improvement compared to the previous piece! Can you update the PDF so it matches the audio?

 

oops my bad, the audio is actually wrong, that was an old version.

Also thanks for always looking at my work I really appreciate it

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Hi @bhelloworld420,

You directly take the first subject of Bach's C# minor fugue in WTCI which is also my favourite! 

In b.9 I won't have the soprano in rest! There's a parallel btw. b.21 to 22. I like the stretto in b.24, nice attempt! I think you could include more movements in the piece as well to make the counterpoint more fluent.

Thx for sharing!

Henry

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I've marked the errors with red (see the score below). It shouldn't take much time to revise them 🙂 Those recommendations that Henry suggested above should also be incorporated to get the most out of this piece.

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