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My first piece after taking a break from composing for a few years - would really appreciate any and all feedback.

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Wow! 😍 You can probably tell one of my favorite composers is in fact, Chopin!

One thing about the piano is that its too far away sounding, making it a bit of a strain to listen to. However, I can put that aside because these variations are in fact gorgeous. But one thing you need to do is.....and I can hear the whole forum thinking this too....please provide a score! Something of this much beauty must be documented!

For example, the Fantaisie Impromptu variations are very fast, and I'm really curious how you notated this (for my own learning). Your key changing is also just, really really awesome. You don't overdo it, but when you make these changes, its magical.

One minor criticism would be that the tempo is insanely fast. I personally like it, but some people may have a hard time with fast music without any breaks. This is why we need to let the listener breath a little with different rhythms. I do appreciate that you tone down the tempo towards the end which I feel is a beautiful touch!

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Hi @EricSinclairJackson,

I would like to know where does the theme come from! I can’t discern its source haha. The piece sounds virtuosic, congrats on playing it! Like @chopin said, the audio quality sounds a bit blurring ( I know I have to no right to say this LoL!!)

With the score I can probably study on your variation technique. Thx for sharing!

Henry

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