My first keyboard piece.

Well here's my first piece.

This month I started learning about consonances/dissonances,suspensions,cadences and I've been playing around with that in my keyboard, it's quite fun for me at least

This piece is the first one I write down, I hope you like it, I accept advice and everything as I'm new at this.

It's a good start, it sounds nice.
Surely everyone would have taken other solutions at certain times. But essentially it sounds good to me, consonances in place and some dissonance in strong time as a passing note.

Hello @Contrappuntista,

Welcome to the forum!

As Luis said you make good use of consonance and dissonance in the music. You make good use of cadence and follow the tonic-predominant-dominant-tonic formula well enough. I would suggest you extending the music to a longer one, possibly in 16 bars or even 32 bars with a contrasting phrase. Thx for sharing and joining!

Henry

7 hours ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said:

Hello @Contrappuntista,

Welcome to the forum!

As Luis said you make good use of consonance and dissonance in the music. You make good use of cadence and follow the tonic-predominant-dominant-tonic formula well enough. I would suggest you extending the music to a longer one, possibly in 16 bars or even 32 bars with a contrasting phrase. Thx for sharing and joining!

Henry

Thank you in my next publication i'll try to show longer music

On 12/20/2024 at 5:04 AM, Carl said:

Well here's my first piece

Did you delete it? It was probably miles better than my first