piano Soft Echoes l Piano Composition

Hi everyone,

I’m new here! I’ve seen a few other pieces of music shared here, and it seems like the perfect place for me to join in.

I’m a French student, and I’ve spent 12 years studying piano at a conservatory. Recently, I’ve started composing, and I feel confident enough about what I’ve created to share it with you.

Right now, I don’t have anyone around for active listening, so I have no idea how to assess the quality of my compositions. I’d really appreciate honest feedback (whether it’s theoretical or just based on your feelings) to understand where I stand and how I can improve.

I hope you will feel as much emotion listening to it as I did composing it 😀

Thank you in advance for your time and your insights!

I think it's a well-written, idiomatic little piece for the piano, moving and effective. Perhaps it has little development or, rather, relies on a theme repeated quite a few times. But given the length of the piece, it does not become tiresome.

Thank you for the feedback.

I had some non-musicians listen to my compositions, and they mentioned that they had trouble understanding what was going on like there were too many elements and too many ideas. So, I tried to simplify both the structure and the harmony. However, I may have gone too far. It’s hard to find the right balance