One more try

A small piece that I recently reviewed. Maybe someone will like it.

Hi @Luis Hernández!

I like the form of the piece!  It seems to start with wide, spread intervals and moves into thirds, then into clusters, then back out to more spread intervals creating a kind of arch-like form.  I do wonder why you chose the meter-less format for this piece.  It seems that many of the parts fit squarely into a 4/4 pattern.  Thanks for sharing!

I love the parallels at bar 15. I think it was smart to use your rhythmic motif too, it helped tie the dissonant nature of this into something I could digest. Well done, Luis.