Luis Hernández Posted February 2 Posted February 2 (edited) A small piece that I recently reviewed. Maybe someone will like it. Edited February 8 by Luis Hernández PDF One more try 1 Quote
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted February 3 Posted February 3 Hi @Luis Hernández! I like the form of the piece! It seems to start with wide, spread intervals and moves into thirds, then into clusters, then back out to more spread intervals creating a kind of arch-like form. I do wonder why you chose the meter-less format for this piece. It seems that many of the parts fit squarely into a 4/4 pattern. Thanks for sharing! Quote
Thatguy v2.0 Posted February 3 Posted February 3 I love the parallels at bar 15. I think it was smart to use your rhythmic motif too, it helped tie the dissonant nature of this into something I could digest. Well done, Luis. Quote
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