Tandem Bike Riding - Four Hand Piano

Hello @Mikayla and welcome to the forum!

This is a very creative idea and concept for a 4-hand piano piece!  I like the main theme as well.  In measure 18 you're using a D half-diminished chord which to me would sound better as a Bb9 6/3.  The voicing in my opinion would also sound better if the right hand of the bass clef piano player was playing Bb-F-Bb as the open 5th would really nicely accompany the D in the bass.  Overall, too, I think you're using too many triads in the low range of the piano which makes it sound a bit muddy.  Thanks for sharing and I hope to see more of your contributions to the forum!

4 hours ago, PeterthePapercomPoser said:

Hello @Mikayla and welcome to the forum!

This is a very creative idea and concept for a 4-hand piano piece!  I like the main theme as well.  In measure 18 you're using a D half-diminished chord which to me would sound better as a Bb9 6/3.  The voicing in my opinion would also sound better if the right hand of the bass clef piano player was playing Bb-F-Bb as the open 5th would really nicely accompany the D in the bass.  Overall, too, I think you're using too many triads in the low range of the piano which makes it sound a bit muddy.  Thanks for sharing and I hope to see more of your contributions to the forum!

 

Thanks so much for the feedback! Always looking to improve.