Ho Sen Ken Posted 17 hours ago Posted 17 hours ago I recently have been working on a piano piece, can I get some feedback on the piece? I would mainly get feedback on these but other advice is appreciated: Form - is it noticible the ABA + coda form? mm189 - is it clearly notated what to do? is the rhythm diverse enough? Thank you! MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu piano_draft_b_minor > next PDF b minor piano - copy Quote
Luis Hernández Posted 4 hours ago Posted 4 hours ago A surprising work. The pace is a bit frenetic, although it calms down and contrasts a bit at the end. I think the ostinato rhythm of dotted eighth notes predominates for the most part, but I do find that there is a lot of variety. At measure 189 it is clear that this is a tonal cluster. I've never seen it noted this way before but I don't see a problem with it. The piece runs very smoothly and the transitions are great. Quote
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