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Not sure if I am overthinking. But I think the melody is slightly boring

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Hi @Atlantis_!

Not sure which part exactly you consider to be the melody here.  I hear many melodic parts being played at once - it gives sort of an impression of "blooming" which I think the title of this track is meant to suggest.  There's a lot of motion in a spread and differentiated heterophonic texture.  I think it's wonderful - I don't hear anything boring here!  Now if you managed to continue it while also modulating to different key centers it would really create a delightfully rich composition!  Thanks for sharing.

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6 minutes ago, PeterthePapercomPoser said:

Not sure which part exactly you consider to be the melody here.  I hear many melodic parts being played at once - it gives sort of an impression of "blooming" which I think the title of this track is meant to suggest.  There's a lot of motion in a spread and differentiated heterophonic texture.  I think it's wonderful - I don't hear anything boring here!  Now if you managed to continue it while also modulating to different key centers it would really create a delightfully rich composition!  Thanks for sharing.

Agreed. I hear this as a collage of color. Perhaps if it continued, a high soaring melodic line to hold our ears would be welcomed, and I'd be curious where you would go from here. Lovely music so far.

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