Does this sound boring?

Not sure if I am overthinking. But I think the melody is slightly boring

Hi @Atlantis_!

Not sure which part exactly you consider to be the melody here.  I hear many melodic parts being played at once - it gives sort of an impression of "blooming" which I think the title of this track is meant to suggest.  There's a lot of motion in a spread and differentiated heterophonic texture.  I think it's wonderful - I don't hear anything boring here!  Now if you managed to continue it while also modulating to different key centers it would really create a delightfully rich composition!  Thanks for sharing.

6 minutes ago, PeterthePapercomPoser said:

Not sure which part exactly you consider to be the melody here.  I hear many melodic parts being played at once - it gives sort of an impression of "blooming" which I think the title of this track is meant to suggest.  There's a lot of motion in a spread and differentiated heterophonic texture.  I think it's wonderful - I don't hear anything boring here!  Now if you managed to continue it while also modulating to different key centers it would really create a delightfully rich composition!  Thanks for sharing.

Agreed. I hear this as a collage of color. Perhaps if it continued, a high soaring melodic line to hold our ears would be welcomed, and I'd be curious where you would go from here. Lovely music so far.

Thank you for the feedback @Thatguy v2.0 and @PeterthePapercomPoser. I was thinking of a flower collage when creating this. 

Notating the next segment (Correctly) is so important. Since my music theory is not up to par, I am concerned about making many mistakes.

Hi @Atlantis_,

Besides what Peter and Vince said, I think texturally the melodic line for each instruments can be distinguished more by setting them in different register! I think here the register is a bit overlapped and hence the sound is not clear enough. Adding a pdf score would definitely help our analysis. Thx for sharing!

Henry

Thanks @Henry Ng Tsz Kiu. I'll redo some of the viola and cello parts. Or at least try to.