Looking for feedback on recent updates to a new project (WIP, unfinished)

Don't mind the out-of-place dynamics, missing parts in percussion, and instrument parts with lots of whole notes. Whole notes are palceholders, dynamics are from Mass-editing for the specific measures that they show up out of place in, and I've only added percussion to the main-motif areas of the score, so far. i.e. where it will be most prevalent.