Still seeking feedback! Made it to the Solid Barline at the end now!!!

Don't mind the out-of-place dynamics, missing parts in percussion, and instrument parts with lots of whole notes. Whole notes are place-holders, dynamics are from Mass-editing for the specific measures that they show up out of place in, and I've added percussion to the main-motif areas of the score, so far. i.e. where it will be most prevalent. with a little bit of it scattered around. 

UPDATE AGAIN (i'm bad about these im sorry)
I've included a PDF + Mp3 for the more recent updates, since doing screen recordings takes forever... lol  

new untitled.pdf

I think some parts (3:37 - 4:30) sound similar to Bernard Herrmann's work in the 50s. It's difficult to find anything wrong with this, as the whole piece has a lot of character to it.