Jump to content

Recommended Posts

Posted (edited)

Hi all,

This is the first completed version of my orchestra work "Love's Endeavor".  I believe you can categorize it as a post romantic style composition.  Feedback is most appreciated.  I look forward to your comments. The score is in C.

Edited by MJFOBOE
MP3
0:00
0:00
PDF
Posted

Just a quick update ... I met with my mentor and got some feedback from my orchestra colleagues.  Please note I will remove the percussion in measures 15 -23.  as well as change the bass line rhythms.  Also I will rework the transition measure 47.  When done - I will upload the newer version with completed/corrected engravings (measure lines) as well.  Looking forward to your comments.

Mark

Posted (edited)

Here's an updated score ... changes in percussion, better transitions, dynamics etc ...

Look forward to comments.

Mark

Please excuse double measure lines in score ... have to figure out how get rid of them.

Edited by MJFOBOE
MP3
0:00
0:00
PDF
  • Thanks 1
Posted

Hi Mark,

I especially enjoyed your harmonic planing in this piece, and the way you effortlessly blend consonance and dissonance (a common feature of many of your works).

It reminds me a little bit of Hindemith's "Mathis De Maler" (which I saw live at London's Barbican last year).

Hope others will chime in here, as I'm not the best analyst!

Alex

Posted

Alex,

Thanks for listening ... and more so .... thank you for referring me to Hindemith's "Mathis De Maler".  What a beautiful work!  I will listen to it a few times more ... so much to appreciate in its orchestration and thematic development.

Mark

  • Like 1

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Unfortunately, your content contains terms that we do not allow. Please edit your content to remove the highlighted words below.
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

×
×
  • Create New...