Henry Ng's Moment Musical No. 2, arranged for organ

EDIT: SORRY I MADE A TRANSCRIPTION ERROR LET ME FIX IT
EDIT2: pdf file is fixed but the audio I need to fix it later as well

EDIT3: audio revamped

The original work by Henry 

Since Henry insisted I post this as my own work, here it is.

Bear in mind I have only played the organ for less than once per week for a few months, please comment any improvements that could be made.

I tried to give different stop voices in the system but the sounds don't go very balanced and apparently the vibratos are pre-recorded and can't be removed, but it kind of gives the right impression I suppose. If I ever get competent enough I might try recording it for real

It sounds fantastic!
I really like the organ and its ability to color with the cantidd of timbres available, when used well. As it happens here.
I think the original composition is well suited to the instrument, or the other way around, by virtue, of course of a good arrangement.
Just an observation about the “agitato” passage from measure 34. I think the chords in the middle part sound too “abrupt”. I don't know, maybe it's the intention, but what strikes me most is the transition to the next part in measures 41-42, which does sound sudden.

Thanks for sharing.
Regards.

Hey @PCC!

I am very grateful you have made this organ arrangement of my Moment Musical! 

I actually love the version you sent me before when the 1st theme is played by prinzipale, but for the 2nd themes I love your usage of different colours here more! I love that you add much more colour in your arrangement, while my original piano version is more contemplative and personal, here is more grand and colourful! 

Also I love your slight change of passages, for example b.32 and b.38 to 41. In fact the change of melody in b.32 is also suggested by a viewer on YouTube, I think the change is great! Though my original intention is to remain introspective with a lower arch of melody, here it’s more melodic. And I love your arrangement in b.34 to 41, very effective in organ, and in b.38 changing from original Bb minor to Eb minor add some varieties too.

Thx very much for your arrangement. I deeply appreciate it!

Henry