First Counterpoint Attempt (plus score feedback)

This is my first attempt at sustained 4-part counterpoint.  How did I do?

Audio – https://soundcloud.com/guy-shahar/track-16-vocal-quartet-satb?in=guy-shahar/sets/new-compositions-2024&si=d2d57780dc6f4ae7a75b7ea8a5dbdbe3&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Score – https://heartfulhealing.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2025/04/Track-16-Score.pdf

I don’t usually ask for feedback on the score, as I barely read music and tend to just rely on the one Cubase generates.  It’s way out of my comfort zone, but I think it’s probably time for me to get the hang of the basics of scoring, so I’ve got Dorico and have been trying (hard) to get it to help me.  How does this one read?  What adjustments should I bear in mind for scoring my next piece?